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Borivoj Bukva (Croatia)

2.35 out of 3.00 points

Zelena trava
uz cvrkut pticica.
Zuti kljunovi.

Green grass
and birdie song.
Yellow beaks.

Translation: Sasa Vazic

Judge's comment: The drawing shows that the artist took considerable time to observe the forms of birds. Nicely done. As for the haiku, I do not see poetic necessity between the first two lines and the third.