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| Judge's comment:Nice haiku, and it matches well with the subject matter of the haiga. As for the treatment of haiga, the color of the water needs a little more thoughts. Considerting the content of the haiku, the color should be more subdued. |
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| Judge's comment:Nice haiku, and it matches well with the subject matter of the haiga. As for the treatment of haiga, the color of the water needs a little more thoughts. Considerting the content of the haiku, the color should be more subdued. |