preglednost
planinskog prevoja
uz odabir puta

clear view
of the mountain pass
with a choice of paths

translated: slobodan milosevic

Judge's comment: Nice landscape painitng. The little two figures suggest the scale of the landscape. As for the haiku verse, it should be placed a bit higher. As the way it looks now, the sky part and the moutain part are visually separeted. If the verse begins from the sky part down to the mountain part, there will be unity in the composition.