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Borivoj Bukva (Croatia)

2.40 out of 3.00 points

gustis i trava
prema vrhuncu brda
u sumrak dana

shrubs and grass
towards the mountain summit
at dusk



translated: slobodan milosevic

Judge's comment: Nice painterly haiga. I wish the verse in white paint was more visible. Bukva san always write the verse vertically, but that may not be a good idea all the time. It is rather difficult to read. You do not stick to the Japanese writing tradition.