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| Judge's comment: I feel that the connection between the photo and haiku is a bit too far apart. Also, the reason for juxtaposing "midday sun" and the rest of the lines is unclear. Photo needs something more to be interesting. |
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| Judge's comment: I feel that the connection between the photo and haiku is a bit too far apart. Also, the reason for juxtaposing "midday sun" and the rest of the lines is unclear. Photo needs something more to be interesting. |