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| Judge's comment: Hoo has developed a system of new language called Earth Language. , and this haiga is made with its symbols. The language is graphical so it inherently suites for haiga. The image and the haiku are both good. Just one suggestion is that the placement of the verses. The verses are centered, but if the English verse moves to left side a little and the Japanese verse to the right side a little, then there would be more movement in the picture plane. |