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Silvija Butkovic (Croatia)

2.65 out of 3.00 points

Japanese translation by Ban'ya Natsuishi

Ritratto del Bianco.
Sulla punte del soffice pennello
tracce della pimavera.

Portret bjeline.
Na vrhu mekog kista
trag proljeca.

Judge's comment: Very handsome photograph. One little thing that bothers me is the size of the verse. A little too large, perhaps. Haiku is good, too.