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Dimljaci nad
krovovima kuca i
jutro ljeta.
Chimneys
above house roofs
and the dawn of the Summer
Translated: Slobodan Milosevic
Judge's comment:The author has his
style of drawing, and it is shown nicely. One thing troubles
me is the semi-circular dark thing at the right bottom. I think
it is unneccesary. The focal point of the drawing is already
established at the two persons like things at the end of the
road. This semi-circular things compete with the focal point.
As for haiku, where is the Kire, or cutting? It just look like
one continuous phrase broken in three lines.
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