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| Judge's comment:The content of the haiku and the theme of photograph are too close together. Redundancy seems to be evident here. In haiku, there are two kigo "cold" and "winter". One kigo is enough in a haiku. |
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| Judge's comment:The content of the haiku and the theme of photograph are too close together. Redundancy seems to be evident here. In haiku, there are two kigo "cold" and "winter". One kigo is enough in a haiku. |