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| Judge's comment:Good photograph. I am not sure if the word "paint" is right. I feel that it does not connect well with the "ice sculpture".The idea of the haiku is good so maybe a little more pondering would make this haiku better. |
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| Judge's comment:Good photograph. I am not sure if the word "paint" is right. I feel that it does not connect well with the "ice sculpture".The idea of the haiku is good so maybe a little more pondering would make this haiku better. |