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| Judge's comment:The photograph is lovely. The black area of the frame is too strong, it kills the softness of the photograph. The verse is not quite haiku. It just appears as a list of three things: plant, bird, and harvest moon. |
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| Judge's comment:The photograph is lovely. The black area of the frame is too strong, it kills the softness of the photograph. The verse is not quite haiku. It just appears as a list of three things: plant, bird, and harvest moon. |