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Borivoj Bukva (Croatia)

2.20 out of 3.00 points

A mosquito
buzzing on the ceiling
ready to sting.
Translated: Slobodan Milosevic

Judge's comment: If the mosquito is ready to sting, then the image should be turned upside down. As the way it is, the fly seems to be flying away. The verse is not haiku nor senryu, it is just discription of the scene.