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| Judge's comment: Interesting abstraction. It succeeds in capturing the feel of the haiku. The haiku, however, needs a little more pondering. It is more like a statement than a poem. |
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| Judge's comment: Interesting abstraction. It succeeds in capturing the feel of the haiku. The haiku, however, needs a little more pondering. It is more like a statement than a poem. |