Tek pristigli vi
nabujali potoci, ne
napustajte me.

You just arriving
swollen streams don't
leave me.

translation: Slobodan Milosevic

Judge's comment:Looks like a nice location: calm stream bordered by green woods, and hazy mountains in distant. As for the haiga itself, a few improvements are necessary. First, the woman with red hat is placed too center, the woman should be placed a little more to the right. Second, the posture of the woman is rather awkward; she does not look rested on the stone, but rather is doing some physical exercise. Third, the red of the hat is too strong that the viewer's eyes just stop there. Viewere's eyes need to flow around the whole picture plane.