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Kilmeny Niland (Australia)

2.85 out of 3.00 points

Japanese translation by Ban'ya Natsuishi

Judge's comment: I always admire Kimeny-san's art work. This time she submitted a photogaraph, which is nicely composed, lighting perfect, overall color harmonious. The haiu has good feeling. Just one little thing. the middle line of the haiku is a bit hard to read.