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| Judge's comment: Good drawing, but I do not see the need to elongate the image of the butterfly. In this haiga, the butterfly is flying and dashing like a bird. Butterflies flutter. Haiku is good, though it is a bit difficult to read. |
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| Judge's comment: Good drawing, but I do not see the need to elongate the image of the butterfly. In this haiga, the butterfly is flying and dashing like a bird. Butterflies flutter. Haiku is good, though it is a bit difficult to read. |