Judge's comment: Nicely composed photograph. I would like to see more details in the high-lighted area. The area is overexposed, making the photo as a whole less strong. As for the haiku, it may not need "desert dry". Just "shifting sands" seems to be good enough to convey intended meaning of the haiku.

between you and me / shifting sands of desert / ~an eternity (I am not sure if "enternity" is appropriate. Something that constantly changes may be better.)