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| Judge's comment: Drawing of shirts needs a little more work. Perhaps you need to decide which lines to be emphasized and which not. It looks rather ambiguous. What is the last word of haiku? I took it to mean "desire". |
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| Judge's comment: Drawing of shirts needs a little more work. Perhaps you need to decide which lines to be emphasized and which not. It looks rather ambiguous. What is the last word of haiku? I took it to mean "desire". |