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Borivoj Bukva (Croatia)

2.25 out of 3.00 points

Hladni potoci
tvoju hladnocu ne bi
zamrznuli


Icy streams
Can not freeze
Your coldness
translated by Slobodan Milosevic

Judge's comment: I am not so sure what the haiku means, which made it difficut for me to relate it to the painting. As for the painting, I suggest you limit the use of colors. There are blue, green, yellow, red, and black. Considering the mood of the haiku, you do not need all of these colors. Limit the number and make more use of light and dark of one or two colors.