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| Judge's comment: The photograph is a little out of focus. The haiku itself is not quite haiku yet, perhaps you need to boil down more what you want to say. |
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| Judge's comment: The photograph is a little out of focus. The haiku itself is not quite haiku yet, perhaps you need to boil down more what you want to say. |