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Borivoj Bukva (Croatia)

2.50 out of 3.00 points

ptica na ruci
mog andjela cuvara -
u snu san

a bird on the arm
of my guardian angel -
in a dream a dream

translated by Slobodan Milosevic

Judge's comment: The woodblock-like quality of the haiga is appealing.

The way the haiku is written needs a little more consideration.